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Relief 
Sweet relief 
Trickling down like blessed rain 
You can breathe 
You can laugh 
You can throw back your head 
And let the tears of relief flow down your face 
You can breathe 
You can finally breathe 
Thank God, you can finally breathe! 
It's been suffocating you for five months 
Almost half a year 
And now you can finally relax 
And be relieved 
That the secret is out 
And everything's okay 
For once.. 
You don't have to be afraid. 
<3 I can breathe. 
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MiyukiThai Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yay~! Everybody can breathe! ^^
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LittleCupofCocoa Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013
<3
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BlackPsychoGirl Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013
I really liked this poem, it has a nice flow to it, just like a good poem is suppose to. Maybe it could be improved by splitting it up in verses. 
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LittleCupofCocoa Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013
Perhaps. But when I wrote it, it just kinda was all one verse. Thanks for your input though, and the fav! <3 I have more poetry in my gallery. ;P 
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BlackPsychoGirl Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013
So do I ^^ I can't have them all on the internet, yet. Because I'm going to use some of them in my "term paper" this year, and I don't want to be accused for just picking them up online somewhere ^^ Tho I will check out some of your other poems.
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LittleCupofCocoa Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013
Ah, I see. Haha, smart choice. They're underneath the folder 'Stories, Poems and Rants'. <3
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Jade-Dragoon136 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
very good, this is uplifting
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LittleCupofCocoa Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013
Thank you!
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Pinka13 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013
:)

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LittleCupofCocoa Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013
:D
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